Neat little musicvideo.
The name in the end suggests you may not have made it, but I'm not gonna blow the whistle because people online get namechanges more often...
Anyway, usually when you make a music video, you kinda try to fit the scenes with the music.
This seems like... kinda random Cowboy Bebop scenes pasted into a song.
Usually the action scenes go into a heavier part of a song, whereas when a song quiets up, the movie does the same.
It may also be a novel idea to have the overall beat of the music co-incide with some events, such as that little sword-hitting clip. If it had matched the beat of the song, it'd have been better - as a music video sense, anyway.
Ahwell, I voted a 4 to encourage you a bit. =P